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离线刘智勇
 

只看楼主 倒序阅读 0 发表于: 2011-10-15
  Good morning,professors! It's my great honor to make a self-introduction to you.My name is LZY,and I'm 21.I'm from Hengyang,a small city in Hunan province.
    When I was a little boy,my father ,who lost his job but struggled hard to support my study,once told me that,"Knowledge can always change one's fate!".I remembered that deep inside.Further more,I kept studing hard and get scholarships every year.I believe I have changed my life to some extent and now I'm on the way to a bright future.
    When I was a sophomore,I worked as the monitor of my class.During this period,I successfully make a balance between affairs of class and my study.I have learned how to manage my time and energy,and how to deal with different problems from a year's hard-working.I treated it as great treasure in my college life.
    I have developed some habbits in spare time.I began to learn playing guitar by myself since last year.I enjoy singing with my guitar's melody.I also like reading,sports,and so on.These habbits can bring not only happiness but also a kind of positive attitude to me.
    At this moment,I'm full of passion but I'm a little nervous since my oral English is not pretty good,but I'm trying to show you the best of me.That's what is important.
    That's all.Thank you!
离线刘智勇

只看该作者 1 发表于: 2011-10-15
保研面试的时候需要做一个英语的自我介绍,我提前写了一个,然后还让英语好的同学帮忙改了,最后就是这篇了。面试的时候由于准备的比较充分,所以效果还不错,导师挺满意的,夸我英语还不错。(其实我的英语除了口语还过得去,其余都很水)

虽然已经没有使用价值了,不过还是贴出来,希望大家一起来找找有什么毛病,毕竟自己看总会觉得没问题的。

各位达人们,快来找茬吧!
离线谢杰

只看该作者 2 发表于: 2011-10-16
我来找茬:I'm from Hengyang,a small city in Hunan province.
可以改成:I‘m from Hengyang City, the second biggest city in Hunan province.

楼主留言:

这个。。好吧

同是天涯沦落人,相逢何必曾相识?山有木兮木有枝,心说君兮君不知.
离线刘承儒

只看该作者 3 发表于: 2011-10-16
恩恩 表示写的不错~~~~  只是奇怪保研为啥要英语自我介绍。。。

楼主留言:

以后如果要发表重要的论文,一般都是要求用英文写,面试时可以看看英文的底子

人生,总是会对什么东西过敏的。
离线张娟

只看该作者 4 发表于: 2011-10-17
很不错了,能镇定的说完这一堆就很好了。

楼主留言:

其实我当时还是很紧张的,就是脸皮厚一直在那笑,显得很放松的样子

离线肖惠文

只看该作者 5 发表于: 2011-10-17
文采飞扬的 看了经历真是强人呀~

楼主留言:

你是没看到我自己写的原文,那叫一个水啊,哎,不提了。。

离线蔡家莲

只看该作者 6 发表于: 2011-10-18
引用第2楼谢杰于2011-10-16 20:11发表的  :
我来找茬:I'm from Hengyang,a small city in Hunan province.
可以改成:I‘m from Hengyang City, the second biggest city in Hunan province.
离线彭灵华

只看该作者 7 发表于: 2011-10-20
呵呵,写的不错,我还在努力学习中......
坚持不懈
离线向芃

只看该作者 8 发表于: 2011-10-31
不错,加油
离线洪金华

只看该作者 9 发表于: 2011-10-31
我们以前也有英语自我介绍的。很不错啊!
卓越品质,源于坚持
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